On closer inspection, the lighting may be slightly over exposed on these images, especially on the left side of their shoulders. I don’t think this will be a big problem, it may be correctable in photoshop, I just need to ensure it doesn’t happen again in upcoming shoots. I am particularly pleased with the way the colours in the hair come up on screen, more vibrant than in real life. I moved the camera further back for this shoot and it has worked well including all hair in the framing. TI am pleased with this shoot and I can see images which may be suitable for finals. I will continue shooting using more models and re-shooting previous models.